Friday 21 October 2011

PITCH FEEDBACK

'good target audience - similar to the artist and also type of song about love etc'


'literal so not that original because it uses the lyrics to create the visuals but can still be visually powerful. The multi-narrative idea is really cool though'
literal fits in with the genre


'falling sown the stairs seems quite dangerous'
close ups to simulate falling?


'gonna be hard to do because of the multiple narratives but will be worth it'
not going to use lots and lots of narratives, because it would get messy. Going to use about 3-4


'achievable with equipment'


'researched similar types of the style of music' 


'what are you going to do for the print work?'
boxes, hearts? or someone playing the guitar


'will work well with the guitars and little narrative'


'overall a good idea, ran through the presentation a little bit too fast, apart from that it worked well. Also you know what you want to do, you can tell you have thought about it'

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